But personally I believe a business letter should end with Very truly yours, not Sincerely.
还行,乔治。但是我个人相信一封商业信函应该以“敬上”结尾,而不是“谨启”。
The children pulled the boat up from the water. Then they started to look around the island.
孩子们把船从水中拉了上来。然后他们开始察看海岛的四周。